After we had our pitch we collected feedback for the rest of our class where in they gave us something they liked about our pitch and areas we could improve on. The positive feedback we got back was;
- We had a detailed storyboard
- Used many different technologies in order to present the pitch
- Our concept was clear
- They liked our costume synergy
- Inspirations for music video
- The pitch was aesthetically pleasing
However they also gave us constructive criticism to help us improve our overall planning;
- There was too much focus on Cher Lloyd (artist from our chosen song)
- As a group we had bad communication regarding our locations
- The risk assessment wasn't detailed enough and should include more risks and how to deal with them
- We were unclear about the ideas for our music video
- The digipack needed more detail
Overall we hope to improve by individually making our own digipak instead of doing it collectively, have better communication and more organisation as a group and focus on the artist we're creating rather than the artist we were influenced by.
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