Rough Ancillary Work: Pitch Feeback

After I pitched my original concept for my digipak to my teacher she gave me feedback on how to improve. She enjoyed my idea of an signature image in the artist's name with influences from Ella Eyre and also she liked my colour themes of white, purple and black. Although she was impressed with the amount of though and detail I had put into planning, my teacher explained the problems with my advertisement. I had missed out the artist's name, but also I had put the wrong information at the top. I put the logos of where the album would be sold however they are supposed to be smaller and at the bottom as they are not the focus of the advert. Apart from that they weren't a lot of problems with my ideas and inspirations, but I will definitely use this feedback to improve the quality of my digipak.