Criticism
- Footage from Bourne Estate are too stationary
- Not enough emotion from artist
- Some didn't like ending the video with the reverse of the beginning fade edit
Positives
- The slow motion part with Athena and the birds was good
- They enjoyed the beginning
- Some enjoyed enjoyed ending the video as it began
Course of action
- Break up the shots from Bourne Estate using an edit or filter
- Try to overpower the acting with good edits and filters
- We want to keep the ending the way it is
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